Hello Everyone! I have just made a new album of photos. It's going to be the first in gallery titled, "Photography Show." As usual, the college I used to attend... and will return to soon... In order to hopefully get my Liberal Arts Degree in Photography. Anyway, they are having their usual photgraphy show and I was invited to submit something. I will submit one print of one of the five pictures in that album. Now here's where you all are going to be helpful. I'm pretty positive the first picture that is in there is the one I've decided to use... but I would like some feedback first to see if it's right choice or if it needs work. Because I feel there is always room for improvement. Now I am asking for constructive critics here... I don't want a simple "It Works... Do It" or "This Sucks." I want some good feedback. Other then that... Thanks! I will be making my final decision right before I print it at CVS on Feb. 23.


Mark